In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining.
Why do you think this is happening?
How can this issue be solved?
In this modern era, number of animals and plants has been declining enormously. In my opinion, the major reasons for this scenario are people’s increasing demand for materialistic world such as cloth, real-estate, stationary, and many more, while it can be solved by arranging campaigns to huge level in every cities and villages.
Firstly, individual has become selfish, owing to that without taking any consideration for future generations, one demands everything such as a big house, expensive and designer outfit, art-of-the-town stationary. For these all things, we have to cut a lot of trees and have to kill creatures on regular basis. The more demand will increase, the more plant and animals will be killed by humanbeings. For example, in Gandhinagar, recently almost 1567 trees were cut by local authorities to broaden roads and highways. Ultimately, humans loosing natural resources.
However, to solve this, the government should run awareness campaigns to all possible sources such as social media, newspaper advertisement with each agencies, hoardigs, cinema houses, airports, bus stations, and wherever it is possible. It must be targted to their own upcoming generations, with visuals and strong content, Because humans are too caring for their children and for them they can alter their lifestyle and can act promptly.For example, in Britain, there is calculations on every textbook for tree cutting on yearly basis, due to this, there are people planting more and more trees near surroundings. Eventually, we might see a big difference for upcoming time.
In conclusion, although people have set their mindset for materialist world, we can modify them by strong drive with awareness for its consequences. Like this, we can curb animal killing and cutting trees.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42652329749 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9472567106 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648745519713 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 97.5970670666 49.4020404114 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.166666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173531706592 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07452239995 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890696922622 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12809712157 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823820140514 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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