Some people believe that pets can be beneficial to children. Conversely, others think this can be unsafe and risky. Both beliefs will be discussed in this essay.
Nothing feels better than seeing your child and your pet grow old with each other and making some wholesome memories with them,this is what most people think. Having a domestic animal along with your children can have a huge impact on their lives. Most people think that it will teach their children how to be more responsible, which is true, as the children will always have to take care of their pets. It will teach them patience also. It is acknowledged that it helps enhance their immune system. Also, it has been approved that children with pets have better self-esteem than those who don't.Some people bring big animals to their children as they believe that it will make them physically stronger.
On the other hand, some people think quite the opposite. They think that keeping pets with their children will cause great harm to their children. This is because of the following reasons; hygienically, some pets contain a lot of germs, so the children might get infected. Also, all pets can instinctively perform an act of violence because some children unconsciously irritate their pet’s peace.
To sum up, keeping a pet with your child is low-key dangerous unless you are extra careful. In my point of view, it's better to stay on the safe side and not bring an animal to your child until he grows older to know how to deal with it carefully.
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...onsciously irritate their pet’s peace. To sum up, keeping a pet with your child...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1126.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7914893617 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3512477063 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578723404255 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0337699494 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5833333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239959304181 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902318044634 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605757635743 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149556429107 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.098413585116 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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