Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion
It is a common agreement that modern technology enable people to do every thing easier, and shopping is one of these things. However, some people argue that shopping today is harder than in the past. In my opinion, the advantages that high technology bring to us in shopping are outweigh the disadvantages.
First and formost, technology makes shopping is much more convenient for consumers. With online shopping, we can buy thing anytime and anywhere. For example, I can do grocery shopping even while I am at the office. Thus , I can save abundance of time to do other things after work.
Online shopping is not only more convenient but also much more transparency compared to conventional shopping. People can compare the prices from different sellers easily, and the reviews on the internet are very helpful to learn about the quality of any products. People will not be influenced by the lead of the sale-assist in the stores and can make their own decision without any pressures. This is not all, the after sales services of online shopping are much better, too. In China, within 7 days after the purchase , people can return the products without any reasons, they even do not need to go out of the house and pay for the return delivery fee neither. The shipper will come to take the goods and the insurance company will pay the fee.
There are some downsides about shopping such as there are so much information that makes people confused, some website sell the products are not what they advertised etc. However, I believe we can avoid this if they buy things on a website with high-reputation and do the research properly before buying things.
In conclusion, from my point of view, modern technology increases the satisfaction of consumers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: outweighed
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Suggestion:
...nfluenced by the lead of the sale-assist in the stores and can make their own dec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90939597315 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65934620202 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55033557047 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5324859289 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4375 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199158469202 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692578796314 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618715110413 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126543039432 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832382253152 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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