Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers.Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Should large companies and industries leave the urban center to regional areas? Moving companies to a local zone far away from the city center, is one of solutions to limit the industry issues. This essay will firstly, show the transportation as one of the problems which adds to disadventages of this and secondly, outline and discuss saving people's health by sending industries out of downtwon.
Employees, in this case, will face a challenge in transportation. A predicament will be the existence of vehicles to carry them to work, and the time which wastes in the way. To resolve the first, it is a piece of cake. Owners have to bring a few buses to take the worker to and from the site. But to save the staff member time, the highway should exist. The alternative of transportation is building houses for laborers near to the companies. But all of these solutions will consume more and more money which will be an obstacle in the beginning.
These days many countries have been worried about pollution, So that the stockholders in some nations decided to construct the factories away from the area where population is concentrated. For example in some cities, It rained acid rain which damaged agricultural crops and harmed citizen health. because they had ignored the admonitions about pollution. For these reasons, putting large companies and industries outside the urban center will limit the population. And they can decrease it by growing the trees and making green areas around the industry area.
In conclusion, Building large companies and industries outside the city is great for them. Some people think that, But there is a challenge in transportation and housing. On the other hand, it would reduce the pollution and make life in the city more healthy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 298, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...ltural crops and harmed citizen health. because they had ignored the admonitions about ...
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Line 3, column 298, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ltural crops and harmed citizen health. because they had ignored the admonitions about ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99324324324 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77273291991 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560810810811 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7155005968 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1111111111 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4444444444 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28892688517 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842415970712 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10548306047 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175065026129 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850188655564 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.