Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, and so it is often argued
that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime.
To what extent do you agree or disagree
Do you think getting out of prison after serving the penalty period makes a person a good citizen? It is claimed that those who get out of prison are the optimum example for teenagers to talk to about the dangers of committing crimes. This essay will argue why those who have been in prison are considered to be accepted by society as a means of forming people’s beliefs and values, despite the consequences it offers on people’s morality.
Society plays a dominant role in shaping people’s beliefs and values; for that, people have always shown solidarity with prisoners who get out and become good citizens in society. In addition, they believe that by finishing their penalty period, they have repented and will never repeat their mistakes again. Moreover, those who are freed from prison are considered to be part of that society; as a result, they will contribute to raising awareness among teenagers and talk to them about the jeopardy of committing crimes.
Despite the minor influences that freed prisoners might imply on teenagers, the idea of embracing their values and beliefs is preposterous. Furthermore, having those who have been in prison talk to teenagers can degrade their morality. So, instead of letting teenagers seek morality, beliefs, and values in intellectuals and scientists, people urge them to learn the difference between good and bad from those who have been to prison and committed crimes.
This essay argues that the idea of making freed prisoners the best choice to address teenagers about the dangers of committing crimes has a flawed understanding. In my opinion, accepting that idea is totally justified,despite the consequences that could be implied for teenagers’ morality.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, in addition, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22661870504 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.795399168 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510791366906 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.5236929583 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.090909091 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2727272727 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364966938494 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14634400934 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805650439398 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231515454081 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540101045194 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.