The pie chart gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie charts demonstrate three distinctive elements, which are carbohydrates, protein and fat, including in three different eating plans for normal people, the individuals with healthy lifestylenand the sport players.
Overall, the figure for carbohydrates always rank first in all the examined methods, while fat is the ingredient which is consumed at least by all given groups of humans. Another noticeble point is that habitants playing sports need a wider range of carbohydrates which is the main energy for doing sports and also regenerating their power for other daily activities.
Regarding carbohydrates, the rate of this subtance for gymers and sportpersons is the highest, standing at 60%, which is dramatically higher than that of average and healthy diet, at 40% and 50% respectively. Moreover, protein is the nutrient, accounting for a quarter of athletes' eating diet, which is the smallest of all examined diagrams. In addition, the percentage of protein that individuals pursuing healthy lifestyle consumed is nearly one-thirds of total, which is slightly lower than that of average chart, at 40%.
By contrast, fat is the element that people from all groups need at least of all examined nutrients. The proportion of average diet is similar to the healthy one, at 20%, which is a little nit higher than that of sport players one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, regarding, so, third, while, at least, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 3.15609756098 412% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1147.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31018518519 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93209835932 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550925925926 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.6153834772 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.375 112.824112599 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 5.23603664747 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145406391732 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697057153616 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045509627935 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100546634891 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484651339627 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.2329268293 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 61.2550243902 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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