It is a good thing if senior management workers in a company get a much higher salary than other workers in the same company. Do you agree or disagree?
The salary of any employee is <span class="highlighter highlight-on">commensurate</span> with the level of experience, workload, skills and stress. The size of salary of the top officials in an organisation is disproportionately higher than the ordinary staff, sparking much debate in now a days. Although there are some drawbacks in this discrepancy, i am not favor of this imbalance.
One compelling argument in favor on my position is the top officials of any industry has to take much stress than the other worker. All responsibilities are on him which is the most <span class="highlighter highlight-on">arduous</span> task. If one employee do some fault, he can be fired although he don't know about this. So it is obvious that the top employee's salary will be much higher than the ordinary worker.
Secondly, the top staff have to obligation to fulfill the company goal, make the officials more burden and stressed. Moreover, The general staff feel very motivated to reach this stage and get more money, lead the staff to focus on their duty and more efficient.
However, if the discrepancy is more than the limit, then there will more likely create anarchy. This can lead all general staff unhappy. If CEO is overpaid and workers are underpaid then there are more likely the firm would suffer a lot.
To sum up, I reiterate my opinion by saying that the size of pay should be higher for top official than the ordinary workers because of workload, stress, and a lot of responsibilities. But the firm must care about whether this discrepancy is fair, not overpaying the top official.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...he firm would suffer a lot. To sum up, I reiterate my opinion by saying that the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, as to, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10606060606 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.1306709634 2.80592935109 147% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7485549872 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2857142857 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166642044483 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591491911462 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655956525589 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0864714334258 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043128553187 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.