Universities should require students to take courses only within those fields they are interested in studying
Fields, broadly speaking could range from arts, commerce, science, sports and more. The students should not be mandated to take courses from each field If they are not interested because that will only consume student’s time and he won’t be able to give enough time to the courses which he really enjoy studying and is passionate about.
One reason, the student should be allowed and given full freedom to choose courses is that the college time is precious and every student should aim to focus as much as they can in right direction that will help them to shape their future. If college do not give student a freedom of choosing subject of their interest then they end up wasting time later to gain knowledge and experience. So studying something one has no interest in is nothing but waste of time and energy. In fact, Mahendra Singh Dhoni, Indian Cricketer is perfect example. During his college days along with his studies he was given equal time to play cricket because of all skills and talent he had. From his childhood his parents encouraged him to pursue sports because he was interested and passionate about it. Without college and parent’s support, Mahendra Singh Dhoni could not have been him personality he is today, he is inspiration of many. Moreover, the parents spent huge amount of money on their child’s education so if student feels burdened with all the subjects he is not interested to study than the money is going waste.
Of course not everyone agree that student should be given freedom to choose subjects he is interested in, because many time student is confused and has obscure vision for their future. Or sometimes student is just neutral about every subjects and can also wrongly interpret the interest or passion, during such time it really helps if college offers courses from wide range of fields which will ultimately help student to figure out his own interest. According to research, 30% engineering student go for management studies later in their career, if they are given exposure to management courses implying that they have learned that may be their interest is not really engineering but management because of their exposure to varied fields during their college time. However, it is more likely that engineering student go for PhD and contribute more to the society by his inventions and research so it is always very important for student to choose subject he is interested in for his betterment.
- Government should place few if any restrictions on scientific research and development 66
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competition 66
- Universities should require students to take courses only within those fields they are interested in studying 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 298, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[2]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'enjoys'.
Suggestion: enjoys
...ugh time to the courses which he really enjoy studying and is passionate about. On...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 272, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'freedom'.
Suggestion: freedom
... future. If college do not give student a freedom of choosing subject of their interest t...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, then, broadly speaking, in fact, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2043.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 414.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9347826087 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46131472998 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48309178744 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.5850083421 60.3974514979 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.928571429 118.986275619 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5714285714 23.4991977007 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 5.21951772744 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264775750817 0.243740707755 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993427371836 0.0831039109588 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863443550487 0.0758088955206 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21772798258 0.150359130593 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048612529735 0.0667264976115 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.8971910112 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.7820224719 144% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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