You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The given graphs below illustrated the entire proportion of four genre films released together with the proportion of ticket sold in a decade from 1996 to 2006 in a particular country
Overall, drama and comedy was the most prevalent types of movies among four genres that was produced by most directors with the most-sold tickets. Meanwhile, three genres including drama, comedy and fantasy had a tendency to rise significantly, the ratio of produced romantic film remained untouched.
Concerning the figure for produced drama and comedy film in 1996, it was recorded at about 26% and 20% respectively and after a decade the figure for drama genre rose to 35%, which was higher than the comdedy by 10%. Turning to the remaining genres, the fantasy was recorded at about 14% in 1996, after which saw a slight growth to approximately 16% in 2000. Meanwhile, the figure for created romantic film stayed unchanged with the figure being recorded at about 7% in the period of 10 years.
In terms of the proportion of cinema ticket sold, comedy films ticket was the most-purchased among four genres, at 20%, followed by drama films ticket sales in the second position accounting for about 15,5%. In the next ten years, both of these figure witnessed an upward inclination to 24% and 16% respectively, which was triple the fantasy and quadruple the romance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 240, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this figure' or 'these figures'?
Suggestion: this figure; these figures
...t 15,5%. In the next ten years, both of these figure witnessed an upward inclination to 24% ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1134.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01769911504 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64718652966 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522123893805 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.5777493746 43.030603864 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.0 112.824112599 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.2857142857 22.9334400587 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123379657003 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598192881047 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454116317701 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914957563396 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589940601133 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.2329268293 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.