The maps illustrate an industrial area in Norbiton in the present day compared with plans for future development of the site
The given picture demonstrates an industrial area located in Norbiton in the current day compared with plans for future development of the site.
Overview, the town will undergo a significant change with the removal of manufacturing zones and numerous additions of recreational amenities, residential areas, places for education and medical care. Additionally, the farmland located in the north side will be the only thing that remains unchanged.
In the current town, there is a central roundabout surrounded by factories and a road running from west to east out of Norbiton. In the future, the roundabout will remain untouched and the factories around it will be taken place by shops, several houses will be built along the northwestern road and a new hospital built to the southeast. The road leading to the east observed an addition of houses on either side of the road with a new place for entertainment and there will be a new school constructed toward the end of the road.
To the south side, a new roundabout will be constructed in smaller size compared to the central roundabout together with a road running from west to east. Notably, a new bridge will be built across the river on the north side. Simultaneously, there will be a relocation of the former farmland to northeast to make room for a construction of houses.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding factories'?
Suggestion: the surrounding factories
...he roundabout will remain untouched and the factories around it will be taken place by shops, several h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1111.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95982142857 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95026468352 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504464285714 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 341.1 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.534907934 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.444444444 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8888888889 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 5.23603664747 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178058060275 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977430315375 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.181736151441 0.0843802449381 215% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189782105283 0.15604864568 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.240297151472 0.0819641961636 293% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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