Some people believe that schoolchildren should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
People have different views on whether or not children should be given homework. While there are some strong arguments against setting homework, I believe that it is still a necessary part of children ‘s education, and it should not be ignored.
It is understandable why some people believe that homework is an unnecessary burden on children. Firstly, there is evidence to support that homework cannot do anything to improve the academic performance of children. In some countries, such as England, children are not given homework, and we can see that in many international competitions they outperform their counterparts living in countries where having homework is the norm. Secondly, parents believe that school time is already long and leave children too tired to do homework when they return home. Also, many individuals claim that play time is just as beneficial as study time, which can play an important role in the brain development of children.
Despite the reasons mentioned above, I believe that homework plays an important role in the schooling of children. The main role of setting homework is to prepare children to study and solve problems independently. They learn to do their tasks alone and at their own pace. Also, by doing homework, children learn how to apply or use what they have been taught at school. For example, by solving math exercises, they learn how to use numbers in their routine activities. Also, they can gain the advantages of independent learning, as they are prepared for their adult life for working alone.
In conclusion, in my view, it is true that homework has its own drawbacks, but its benefits outweigh them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my view, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10256410256 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77288167576 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56043956044 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2037961636 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361475960508 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143351009432 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876088235434 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223886611315 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827895034716 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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