In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents choosing to self-educate their children at home rather than sending them school. Do the advantages of home education outweigh disadvantages.
In this contemporary world, there are many technology devices also increase the number of parents take their children for study at home than sending to school. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages before conclusion is drawn.
Admittedly, there are some arguments in favor of increase the number of parents choosing their children self-education. First, self-education are believed to equalize study opportunities among young people regardless of their background family. This home schooling support, presumably tends not only to increase the overall education rate of lower-income people but also to mitigate their feeling of inferiority, which promotes an egalitarian society. Second, self-education would probably result in a higher supply of highly qualified workers, which benefits society in the long run. In fact, it is acknowledged that knowledgeable and skilled human capital is imperative to foster economic growth and technological development in any nations.
Nevertheless, the resultant problems would be far more significant than the minor benefits once if all people choosing home schooling. First, self-education would likely correspond with tremendous financial strain on a country. Generating no income from tuition or fees, schools could over-reliant on the state-budget for funding, meaning that there would be less input to develop other important areas such as healthcare system and transport infrastructure. Second, self-education tempt many young people including those who are not academically inclined or show no interest in study, thereby adding great burden for staff school and government and potentially wasting time that these young people need go to school. It, instead, would be a more viable option if self-education was focused on supporting less-privileged yet gifted students.
In conclusion, this argument also has some benefits but the disadvantages outweigh and more drawbacks. From my perspective, government need to create a clear self-education system in country if people want that.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, second, so, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.83 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25277829965 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5109101167 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.928571429 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357665938609 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114748110771 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839782335728 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215422198693 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672185122373 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.53 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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