In many countries around the word, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing.
Do you think it is positive and negative development?
Recently, is has been increasingly equivalent for rural citizens in many nations to migrate to urban areas. From my perspective, I suppose that this practice will have detrimental effects in terms of the environment and employment related issues.
To begin with, one of the most prominent problems caused by city overpopulation is environmental degradation. In other words, the more individuals move to urban areas, the higher industrial production and construction activities are. As a consequence, there exists overconsumption of resources, and an enormous amount of garbage, sewage, exhausted fumes, and carbon footprint will be discharged into the surroundings. Moreover, this can lead to long-term implications such as the outbreak of infectious and fatal diseases. New Delhi, capital of India, is a justification. This city presents a huge environmental crisis due to high levels of environmental deterioration caused by its rapid growth of personal vehicles and industrial and commercial operations. In fact, New Delhi is often ranked among the most polluted cities in the world, with dangerous consequences for public health, including respiratory illnesses and reduced life expectancy.
Another contributing factor is the deficiency of employment opportunities. High influx of rural workers appears to be equal to unnecessarily abundant labor force, which put pressure on urban jobs markets. If people cannot find formal and suitable professions, they tend to take on low-paid and unstable occupations, even they might accept jobs which do not offer job security or social protection, especially the low-skilled and blue-collar workers. This not only contributes to urban poverty but also widening economic inequality, undermining the promise of a better life that initially attracted people to the city.
Undeniably, rural-to-urban migrations can provide better living standards for many individuals regarding healthcare, education, and infrastructure. However, it cannot be guaranteed for a mass population. As a matter of fact, many rural migrants now have to face overcrowded houses, long waiting time for public services, and poor working and living conditions; as a result, their living standards actually are declined, not improved.
In conclusion, the imbalance in demographic change may negatively affect one nation on account of environmental and employment related issues. Therefore, it seems to me that governments should take measures to distributes equal attention and resources for both countryside and metropolitan areas to ensure a balance in population of both areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...te to urban areas. From my perspective, I suppose that this practice will have de...
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Line 5, column 211, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: You might need to use the base form of the verb here: 'distribute'.
Suggestion: distribute
...hat governments should take measures to distributes equal attention and resources for both ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, as to, i suppose, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2218.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.7911227154 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34010020602 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647519582245 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 702.9 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2949478131 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.222222222 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2777777778 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109608614004 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0273966365472 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0227548792109 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0540650142368 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00714974182193 0.056905535591 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.3 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.7 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 146.0 78.4519038076 186% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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