Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Life is always full of challenges as well as opportunities and nobody can avoid changes in their lives. While some people tend to enjoy changes in their lives, others try their best to stay static and escape form any possible dangers. In fact, different people have different attitudes toward changes due to their backgrounds and characters. The essay will analyze both two points below and illustrate an opinion in the end.
With regards to people who are inclined to spend their lives doing the same things and escaping from changes, they are in fact lack of safety in their minds and unwilling t...
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