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The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009
The table illustrates the percentage of school children attending four different types of secondary school from 2000 to 2009. It is evident that the specialist, grammar and voluntary-controlled schools experienced declines in numbers of pupils, whereas the community schools became the most important providers of secondary school education during the same period.
To begin, the proportion in voluntary-controlled schools fell from just over half to only 20% or one fifth from 2000 to 2009. Similarly, the relative number of children in grammar schools -- just under one quarter -- dropped by half...
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Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.6 4.0
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Sentence Length SD: 5.182 7.5
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