children from 7-11 spend more time warching TV and playing video games than before.what are the effects of this on children family and so iety and give proper solution of this?
Children are more agile,impulsive,funloving and doing many activities for their amusement but due to urbanization, children spend more time inside their homes rather than playing outdoors. Presently, juveniles kill maximum time on watching TV and playing recreational games in a big way due to lack of playgrounds. However,such habits will be dangerous for them.
To begin with,multifarious points about negative effects of passive activities such as watching TV and playing video games.First and foremost, Health and fitness are declined due to these activities. To illustrate, Nowadays,pupils sp...
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