Consumption of Fast Food by Australian teenagers
The chat compares average the amount of fast food consumed by teenagers in Australia from 19975 to 2000.
It is clear that the consumption of pizza and hamburgers increased steadily over the period, while the consumers of fish and chips gradually declined.
In 1975, fish and chips were the most popular fast food by Australian teenagers, they eaten 100 time a year. However, the consumers of pizza and hamburgers had much different than lovers of fish and chips, which were eaten around 5 time a year.
In sharp contrast to this, after 15 years later, teenagers who consumed fish and chips fell slightly, it than decreased steadily from 1985 to 2000. Whereas the consumption of pizza increased respectively between 1970’S and 1990’S, in final period, this consumer leveled off steady. A further hamburgers were the biggest rise that was gradual rebound in the first ten years, it finish at the same level with fish and chips in the first period, with consumption at 100 time a year.
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