Write a letter to one of your classmates and invite him to a class reunion When and where is the party Give some details about what is going to happen at the party Tell him her what you have been doing recently

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Write a letter to one of your classmates and invite him to a class reunion.
When and where is the party?
Give some details about what is going to happen at the party.
Tell him/her what you have been doing recently.

Dear John,

I hope this letter finds you in the pink of your health. I am writing this letter in connection with the invitation for the party which will be held on coming Saturday at Hotel President.

Firstly, it is a kitty party for all my classmates and all the arrangements of advance booking and catering have been done by me and other buddies. On that day, we will have get together at evening around 5’o clock at the hotel. During the party, there will be some stalls of snacks and beverages. What is more, excited thing is that the arrangement of Disco Jockey with Dance Floor. As I know...

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we will have get together at evening
we will get together at evening

excited thing is that the arrangement of Disco Jockey with Dance Floor.
excited thing is the arrangement of Disco Jockey with Dance Floor.

Sentence: As I know, my all friends were quite eager for dancing.
Description: A determiner, possessive is not usually followed by a determiner/pronoun, pre-quantifier
Suggestion: Refer to my and all

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