Would you prefer to take a part time course or have a part time job during your summer vacation Use details and examples to support your explanation

Not only because it will gives students experience, but also they will earn money that will help them
Description: Not only...but also is not used properly. can you re-write this sentence?

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Some duplicate words or sentences. Look:
No. of Words: 401 while No. of Different Words: 173

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 20 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 25 15
No. of Words: 401 350
No. of Characters: 1671 1500
No. of Different Words: 173 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.475 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.167 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.461 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 100 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 66 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 50 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.04 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.618 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.64 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.328 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.462 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.101 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5