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Two years ago, radio station WCQP in Rockville decided to increase the number of call-in advice programs that it broadcast; since that time, its share of the radio audience in the Rockville listening area has increased significantly. Given WCQP's recent success with call-in advice programming, and citing a nationwide survey indicating that many radio listeners are quite interested in such programs, the station manager of KICK in Medway recommends that KICK include more call-in advice programs in an attempt to gain a larger audience share in its listening area.
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argument 1 -- not OK.
suggested:
It worked Two years ago for radio station WCQP, maybe it doesn't work nowadays. or it works for WCQP, it doesn't work for KICK.
argument 2 -- better: even if the survey is reliable, nationwide interest toward these programs does not indicate the people who live in Medway also favor call-in programs.
argument 3 -- OK
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