Describe the place you call home and tell about a good or bad experiences within the time you stay there
There are many places which you can be arounded, but there is nowhere like home. Many members of society have their own places that they can relax and stay with loved ones. And so i am, i have my home too.
In general, my home is simple, just need my immediate family is enough for it to being home. Actually, my family live in the house on Hai Thuong Lan Ong street in district 5, where is well-know as China Town in Vietnam. There is a lot of Cantonese or Sino-vietnamese concentrate there, therefore, it is heavy influenced by China culture.
I so love this place as I can be myself, I feel comfortable and I happy when I stay here; especially is I can spend my youth with my family, I can celebrate every special moment and every important holiday with them and best of all is I can sharing my growing period happiness with them
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 181, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... relax and stay with loved ones. And so i am, i have my home too. In general,...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ones. And so i am, i have my home too. In general, my home is simple, just need...
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Line 5, column 242, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'share'
Suggestion: share
...iday with them and best of all is I can sharing my growing period happiness with them ...
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Line 5, column 287, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng my growing period happiness with them
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, so, therefore, well, i feel, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 41.998997996 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 684.0 1615.20841683 42% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 157.0 315.596192385 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35668789809 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51431860442 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 176.041082164 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649681528662 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 506.74238477 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.1941743684 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7142857143 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104777400368 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595627484486 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606058717656 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0787336900206 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638402770141 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 12.4159519038 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 78.4519038076 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.