Describe the place you call home and tell about a good/bad experiences within you stay there
There are many places which you can be around, but there is nowhere like home. Many members of society have their own places that they can relax and stay with loved ones. And so I am, I have my home too.
In general, my home is simple, just need my immediate family and warm love from them is enough for it to being home.
Actually, my family live in the house located on Hai Thuong Lan Ong street in district 5, where is well-know as China Town in Vietnam. There is a lot of Cantonese or Sino-vietnamese concentrate there, therefore, it is heavy influenced by China culture.
I’m totally into this place as my home is there and I can belong with my close-relative. In their love, I can be myself, I feel comfortable, happy when I stay here and it can heal all my sadness. Especially is I can spend my youth with my family, I can celebrate every special moment and every important holiday with them and best of all is I can share my growing period happiness with them. I have countless pleasure when I come back home
But I went through a bad unexpected experience that it was a fire next to my house in midnight last year and it affected my family members. Fortunately, so far so good, my house is fine and no one in my relative injure. To think again, I still be scared by that terrible fire.
However, no matter how bad it is, where there is my family, there will be my home
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 82, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...here is my family, there will be my home
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, so, still, therefore, well, i feel, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1134.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32824427481 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50979086218 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572519083969 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8475392318 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2307692308 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117086662728 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526889693961 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525676757729 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0685898282982 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532503438656 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 12.4159519038 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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