governments should support people who have no homes.
do agree or disagree?
The basic and essential necessity of human is shelter. In my opinion providing house or financial assistance to supply it is one of the government’s tasks. There are two most effective reasons; first: reducing in criminal actions and second: increasing in physical/mental health in a society.
The first: homelessness might do anything to fill their stomachs and surviving. As a consequence the governments should provide this minimum necessity to prevent crimes.
The second: developing the epidemics cab be a result of existing homelessness. Lack of cleanliness or on time treating might increase these diseases. In addition, preventing crimes causes in metal health of society.
As mentioned, the governments should prepare various solutions for increasing the security and health of society. Providing the house is the one of these solutions and the most important tasks of governments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...g to fill their stomachs and surviving. As a consequence the governments should pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, so, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 771.0 1615.20841683 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 136.0 315.596192385 43% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66911764706 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.41495297035 4.20363070211 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27805135328 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 176.041082164 48% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 506.74238477 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.3325952264 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.1 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0843941965137 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0315899307666 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426781543398 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0549182943857 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455643441362 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.01 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.33 Out of 6
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