There is no ambiguity in stating that we are dwelling in a modern era, some schools of thought feel enthusiastic about voting, while other are making contradict views and say that people should have freedom to choose not to vote. In my opinion, voting should be mandatory for every citizen and former notion has several strong elements that deserve attention. So, this essay will dredge deeper into this notion before reaching at concrete conclusion, in the upcoming paragraphs.
Looking at the bright side of voting, to embark with, in the democratic nation it is the basic right of every person to give his vote to honest person, so that right minister can work for their development. Moreover, ministers of the nation work for people without any greed.
In addition to the above, as can be seen that, crime is going increased in every nation around the world, when people will promote voting system instead of choose minister randamly then it help to diminish the corruption in the nation.
After hashing out the aforesaid deliberation, I firmly assert that voting system offer the full feedom to everyone and masses can choose minister according to their unity. Ultimately, it will uplift the life standard of every citizen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, then, thus, well, while, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1031.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 205.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02926829268 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45934945911 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653658536585 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.1189080927 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.875 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.625 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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