There is no ambiguity in stating that we are dwelling in a modern era, some schools of thoughts feel enthusiastic about mobile phone , while rest are making contradict views and say that it has adverse impact on society. In my perspective, it is helpful for human being. So, this essay will dredge deeper into both the notions before reaching at concrete conclusion, in the upcoming paragraphs.
Looking at the brighter side of the mobile phone technology, to embark with, mobile save the precise time of human, as can be seen that we can send any messages from any corner of the earth within fractions of seconds, in such a way it save the time. Moreover ,It work fast and accurately, it also reduce the workload of human because it can do the calculation very fast and quickly.
On the gloomy side of mobile phones, initially, it is not good for students, it can be see that most of the students distract from their goal, it is happened due to mobile phone. Apart from this, all age groups are effected by this, it is the major reason due to which eyesight of the humans get weak.
After hashing out the aforementioned deliberation, I firmly assert that mobile has more positive impact then negative impact. Ultimately, mobile uplift the life of every person.
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- Motivation Letter 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
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Message: Did you mean 'saves'?
Suggestion: saves
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Suggestion: ,
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Message: Did you mean 'works'?
Suggestion: works
...ch a way it save the time. Moreover ,It work fast and accurately, it also reduce the...
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Message: Did you mean 'reduces'?
Suggestion: reduces
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Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, second, so, then, thus, well, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1055.0 1207.87684729 87% => OK
No of words: 221.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77375565611 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56008471803 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660633484163 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 379.143842365 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1499016098 50.4703680194 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.222222222 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5555555556 20.9669160288 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 7.25397266985 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120021188234 0.242375264174 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449863346254 0.0925447433944 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435861429667 0.071462118173 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0738409957183 0.151781067708 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033532259235 0.0609392437508 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.