In modern scenario, unprecedented technological advancements have modernized the present generation. Numerous juveniles decide to separate from domestic environment either in pursuit of excellence in academics or to find better job opportunities in another city. According to my perception, this is considerably beneficial as well as detrimental. Isolation from home may leave youngsters in jeopardous circumstances.
Commencing the discussion, nowadays enumerable young individuals get separated from home in search of prosperous future. This can be considered advantageous from different perspectives. Firstly, separation from home makes them self-reliant as well as enable the juveniles to shoulder their responsibilities and professional commitments. Besides, young people develop comprehensive outlook to manage their expenditures and spend more wisely. Moreover, they learn the significance of family values and ethos. Apart from this, it offers them tremendous opportunity to pursue higher intellectual education from the renowned educational institutions. Also they get more conducive environment to achieve concentration in their studies.
Further elucidating my perspective, separation from parental control can be considered hazardous from certain aspects. Firstly, staying away from domestic environment offers the youngsters immeasurable freedom that leaves them in state of loneliness and despair. They suffer disaster and indulge themselves in drug addictions and innumerable sinful habits. For instance, recently, famous Indian actor committed suicide at a young age due to horrendous circumstances in his life. Thus, isolation from home atmosphere can be considered catastrophic as well as disadvantageous in certain situations.
To recapitulate, modernization has played tremendous role in modifying the minds. Nowadays, juveniles get separated from parental guidance in pursuit of excellence in education or work. It is beneficial as it enables self-dependent and responsible. On the contrary, young people may suffer disasters due to parental control and encouragement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, look, may, moreover, so, thus, well, apart from, for instance, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.35314685315 5.12529762239 124% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.53589869598 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.917598448 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.85 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176320706086 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497947302888 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387220903536 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104176260915 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242239840394 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.43 50.2224549098 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.96 12.4159519038 153% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.57 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.33 Out of 6
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