your niece has just graduated from high school with remarkable grades. She was the brightest student in her class. However, she wants to work immediately does not consider going to college
Explain how you feel about her school grades
Explain why going to college is necessary
Explain why working instead of perusing her college education is a mistake
Dear Rukhsar,
First of all I like to congratulate you on receiving the incredible grades in your school exams and for being nominated as the most intelligent student in your class. I am very happy and much excited to hear that news. However, at the same time I am little disappointed to hear that you are planning to drop out the college education and start working.
It is very rational to say that further education gives you strength to defend your hardships and bring success in every aspect of life and here I like to explain why? For one thing, it will help you to exercise good judgments and allow you to decide the best for you. For another thing, the radical change in education system helps you to keep updated with new technology. As I know you are interested in fashion designing course and therefore, college studies definitely will help you to achieve your goals.
Like we all know that working is a must thing but before that proper education is also equally required to find a reasonable place in any reputed company. For another thing, you will probably not get a chance to study once you start your career.
I hope you will keep all these things in mind and revert back your decision. If you need any assistance from my end please call me anytime.
Best Regards,
Noor Ali
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2017-11-09 | noorali.bhayani@srb.gos.pk | 56 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 78, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... in mind and revert back your decision. If you need any assistance from my end ple...
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Line 12, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... anytime. Best Regards, Noor Ali
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, another thing, first of all, for another thing, for one thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64655172414 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41186807475 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612068965517 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4892460683 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124592466698 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466695613889 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325833747011 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0795865036128 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214103282343 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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