Industrialization created a lot of jobs in developed countries, which resulted in the migration of a lot of people from other parts of the world. Due to this huge migration a lot of issues emerged, which affected the human life in those countries. This essay will further discuss the problems emerged due to people migration and their solutions.
To begin with, Due to an increase in industrialization, developed countries were in the scarcity of required human labor. To full fill this requirement they started to employ people from the foreign countries. Although the industrialization benefited the states with increased in tax income, this also affected the lifestyle of the people. As major problems emerged such as the inadequate supply of the food and water supply, unavailability of the doctors in the city hospital and scarcity of the housing.
The government can solve these issues by calculating the demand and the current supply and then fill the gap. They can procure the required food supply in advanced with the right information in hand. Apart from that, the number of doctors in the city hospital should be increased to support the current inflow of the sick people.
After analyzing the above facts, I would like to recapitulate that migration of an unexpected population may lead any country into a mess, but with the proper planning, the government can overcome the problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, apart from, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 10.5418719212 19% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1176.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 229.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13537117904 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9695864332 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53711790393 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 363.6 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1936789967 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.909090909 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8181818182 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297644455631 0.242375264174 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108483033928 0.0925447433944 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920888882231 0.071462118173 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161394122634 0.151781067708 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.150924365217 0.0609392437508 248% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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