In the 18th century due to industrialization, a lot of people migrated to developed countries. This affected lifestyle and increased problems in developed countries. What is your opinion about this?
Recently, the phenomenon of migration to developed countries in the 18th century and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of cheap labor is highly beneficial, such an issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that cultural diversity can be a point, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, accepting migrants to a destination country can provide society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that the merits of inexpensive workers, as well as developing industries in developed countries, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment that discovered after immigration during the Industrial revolution the efficiency of factories had doubled. Thus, beneficial ramifications of both talented workers and lower wages apparently can be seen.
On the other hand, the impact of migration to wealthy countries might increase the consequences of experience discrimination. Moreover, the fundamental aspects of changing lifestyle and traditions of destination areas could relate to this reality that the demerits of unfriendly behaviors pertain to not assimilation by locals. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the number of crimes is correlated negatively with accepting of destinations' lows. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of breaking down traditions.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of migrating to developed countries far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of globalization of industries prove the significance of talented workers, but also pinpoint adopting new cultures implications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1207.87684729 138% => OK
No of words: 290.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73793103448 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34396718404 2.71678728327 123% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 139.433497537 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644827586207 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 379.143842365 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6467703626 50.4703680194 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.666666667 104.977214359 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.9669160288 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226438627809 0.242375264174 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688652462162 0.0925447433944 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736611140408 0.071462118173 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122006307888 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218317023994 0.0609392437508 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 12.6369458128 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 53.1260098522 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.31 11.5310837438 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.2 8.32886699507 134% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 55.0591133005 212% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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