Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us want to be and to look the same. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The advertisements are one of the ways that shaping our life and most of the time leading us to imitate someone in order to look like this idol or actress, etc. However, there would be a good extent for that. But on the other hand, there will be a disadvantage beyond that mimic.
I would like to discuss first the pros of the advertising as there are many tools, cloth, hardwares you would not be able to know or to see unless someone shows you that. In addition, people normally would like to be the second lab rat, in order to avoid the loss that could be due to the bad experience. These advantages that would be a reason to improve the life style even if someone else look like us, but still we are both looking good and behaving nice. Generally, any human being aims to live better and eat better. This can not be achieved unless i would know my surrounding and that for sure by the adversting.
On contrary, life started to be very boring. Each one create something or wear something all the people rush to imitate him and they would like to be as this X. This way of thinking in many cases affecting the main ethics and common sense. To mimic someone first you would need to know what the factors and the beliefs of this person. Then, you would find out if this might be awkward for you or can fit.
In conclusion, every thing in the life has pros and cons and that always depended on how are we using and where! Therefore, the mindset is the vital cause behind the results of the usage.
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| 2018-08-20 | ahmedradjik | 62 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 393, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[4]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'looks'.
Suggestion: looks
...ove the life style even if someone else look like us, but still we are both looking ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 556, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...better. This can not be achieved unless i would know my surrounding and that for ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, second, so, still, then, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, in many cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 6.10837438424 246% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1222.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 283.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31802120141 5.00649968141 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21183914231 2.71678728327 81% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547703180212 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 383.4 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0118108174 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2857142857 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.25397266985 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233612402448 0.242375264174 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890948681836 0.0925447433944 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451837631826 0.071462118173 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134273094975 0.151781067708 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805973851513 0.0609392437508 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 12.6369458128 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 53.1260098522 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 11.5310837438 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.32886699507 88% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.0 Out of 90
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