ageing people good/bad?
The importance of people growing old has always been a debatable topic. Many people claim that aging people is good to society as they know cultures and traditions compared to present generation. Others reject this notion and argue that they will become the burden to the government to provide pensions and healthcare facilities. In my opinion, latter proposition appears to be more rational. The following essay would further elaborate both sides with justifying reasons and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
To start with, in today's fast running world, present generation people are not aware of most of our ancient traditions and cultures. People who born at that time will help us to explain the importance of our human evolution and development. Aging people will teach young people about discipline and how to behave with elders which are lacking in the majority of pupil now. For example, these people know the rituals and they follow certain myths to arrange a marriage. This example exemplifies us that old people are used to us in order to follow our cultures.
On the other hand, increasing in old age people have many problems. Firstly, it leads to more expenditure for health. As people become old, they obtain more and more diseases which are the big burden on family members to spend money. And at the same time, it puts pressure on the government to release new financial budget for the health care of old people. Increasing people leads to unemployment and young people commit the crime for survival purpose.
According to the arguments aforementioned, one can reach out to the conclusion that aging people are bad to society and put huge pressure on the government to bring new policies to take care.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, thus, for example, in my opinion, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 289.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60377806374 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570934256055 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9834518553 50.4703680194 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3125 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0625 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341796366462 0.242375264174 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101072425679 0.0925447433944 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100007826706 0.071462118173 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195864935858 0.151781067708 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216686733814 0.0609392437508 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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