Any new technological development in recent years is a boosting or drag for the society in general. Do you agree or disagree that mass media, like TV, radio and newspaper have a huge impact on people, especially young generation? What is your opinion? Provide reason and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
One of the conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the ongoing trend of advance technological development is boosting up in the inhabitant around the world, be it an affluent or impoverished nation. Some people believes that radio, newspaper and TV having huge impact on young adolescence, while others disagree. This essay will present an overview of both the good and bad impacts and suggest some potential solutions.
At the outset, there are myriad reasons of this soaring concern. Firstly, in today's advancement in technology is empowering the society with enormous ways by means of TV and newspapers throughout the world aid to know good and bad around which empowers the every activity online. For example, in country between India and Pakistan due to political issues lead to start violence between countries directly shared over the News or televisions by getting known. It is needless to say that, mass media is a good source to know the daily activities of the ongoing things, happenings throughout the world.
However, there are some pitfalls that can easily overwhelmed the potential benefits of technological development over the society. The primary concern comes from the fact that, due to mass media TV and radio were articles or news shows negative impacts on religious lead to violence. For example, in some countries because of negative showing on religious matters causing to arouse the culprits in the nation and thus resulting bloodshed. As such, it is crucial to avert newspaper the government strictly to look into this matter.
To recapitulate from the aforementioned arguments, one can conclude that despite of having positive impacts of advancement in technology, but the upsides shall be close to look into this matter to avoid negative information from watching TV.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 373, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'arousing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: arousing
...ve showing on religious matters causing to arouse the culprits in the nation and thus res...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, look, so, thus, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 31.9359605911 166% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 292.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25684931507 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83583770892 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585616438356 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0311738822 50.4703680194 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.916666667 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165053452336 0.242375264174 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580925886222 0.0925447433944 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522762139438 0.071462118173 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954717456294 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355554379705 0.0609392437508 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 55.0591133005 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.