It is argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, one of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in ongoing debate that it is outdo to get married before finishing the education or job, be it an affluent or impoverished nation. Some people believe that getting married before job have a negative impact while others disagree. In this essay, I will elaborate both merits and demerits.
At the outset, there are myriad reasons of soaring concern. Firstly, in today's world, it is better to have a job at first, without job, it results in complications, responsibilities commence to soar, without having a good education and an apropos job to maintain family life is very hectic. For example in most of the countries, parents are letting their kids to get married without understanding the negative impacts that lead them divorce, Hence, needless to say that it is always outdo to aware parents on negative facets of early stages marriage on their kids.
To embark this, another pivotal facet, getting married and after getting the job will results also with family problems, it is irrefutable to say that all there are no such positive aspects that can be notified. For instance, a person on managing the new job, he/she may not accentuate properly on the Job which results in problems with the managers and destroy the Job. Apparently, it is always better, first to accentuate and well experience in job then to get married.
After analyzing, one can conclude that it is always advisable to be well organised in life with everything and aware to parents focus properly, to have a suitable background before marriage thus this are indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'outdone'.
Suggestion: outdone
...al upsurge in ongoing debate that it is outdo to get married before finishing the edu...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 484, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'outdone'.
Suggestion: outdone
...ence, needless to say that it is always outdo to aware parents on negative facets of ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'result'
Suggestion: result
... married and after getting the job will results also with family problems, it is irrefu...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, first, firstly, hence, if, may, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96415770609 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70554007023 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.0747001309 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.5 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223865924829 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899363331632 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675057414588 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132947651339 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076782243672 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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