Any re invention that you think prove beneficial or detrimental to society.
The implication of technology has revolutionized our lives with its arrival human totally which is fairly debatable has now further attention from numerous arenas. The sizeable influence of this subject has generated controversy over the potential impact of this trend. I believe that technological advancement like computers have not made our life easier by its multi-tasking feature that can minimize to be a cure for our society and this will be further discussed before reaching a logical conclusion.
At the out, there are diverse reason why this subject is considered as vital, but the most conspicuous one steams from the fact that computer being the biggest invention of technology is widely use in all the fields for instance medical education entertainment it has not only minimized the work load but also helped do work efficiently from doing simple calculation to perform a major surgery.
Nevertheless some people adopt an opposing view and tend to believe that however our development on these type gadgets has proved detrimental for us people these days tend to rely more than which has affected their healthy negatively. Because people rely too much on these machines and a result their physical activity has reduce which in turn leads to various health hoards apart from this we are ignore the personal relations by being busy making the virtual friends so our personal relationships get weak in this days can be addressed with some positive facets as well as there are innumerable facets in favor of that.
Conclusion, no doubt that computer being biggest invention of mankind has made our life but there are so disadvantage of this invention and this is curse of humans.
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- Any re invention that you think prove beneficial or detrimental to society. 11
- Any re invention that you think prove beneficial or detrimental to society. 11
- Do you think consumers should avoid over package products. 55
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'used'.
Suggestion: used
...ggest invention of technology is widely use in all the fields for instance medical ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nevertheless,
...lculation to perform a major surgery. Nevertheless some people adopt an opposing view and ...
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Line 5, column 324, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'reduced'.
Suggestion: reduced
...nd a result their physical activity has reduce which in turn leads to various health h...
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Line 5, column 399, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'ignored'.
Suggestion: ignored
...us health hoards apart from this we are ignore the personal relations by being busy ma...
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Line 5, column 512, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... our personal relationships get weak in this days can be addressed with some positiv...
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Line 7, column 36, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'being the biggest'.
Suggestion: being the biggest
...t. Conclusion, no doubt that computer being biggest invention of mankind has made our life ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, well, apart from, for instance, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 277.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13357400722 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77738656104 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620938628159 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.5024630542 190% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.533293472 50.4703680194 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 203.142857143 104.977214359 194% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.5714285714 20.9669160288 189% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4285714286 7.25397266985 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0455580007726 0.242375264174 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0230865738492 0.0925447433944 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0303233942806 0.071462118173 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0338750738418 0.151781067708 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280484945912 0.0609392437508 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.5 12.6369458128 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.43 53.1260098522 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 10.9458128079 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.3980295567 169% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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