Nowadays TV has become essential part of life. Medium to spread news and awareness and for some, it acts as a companion. What is your opinion about it?
The implication of television has become a essential part of life which is fairly debatable has gained farther attention from numerous arenas. The sizeable influence of this subject has generated controversy over the potential impact of this trend and I believe that I agree with this line can television is became a essential part of life because we are watch news and movie at home with the help of television and this discussed before reaching a logical conclusion.
At the outside, there are diverse reasons why this subject is considered as vital, but the most conspicuous one steams from the facts that some people have a daily habit of watch television. But I think the television is a good source of watch news and other serials and this can be contributing factor to television is the good way of entertainment for instance, a research invariable shows.
Nevertheless, some people adopt an opposing view and tend to believe that some negative impact of watch television. This is big effect on eyes sight and change believer can be addressed with some positive facets a well as there are innumerable facts in favor of that but the most pre dominate one steams.
Overall conclusion, I agree with this point television become essential part of life but there are some negative impact of watch television.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nevertheless, so, well, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1099.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 221.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97285067873 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77067214729 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 139.433497537 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524886877828 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 356.4 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.5024630542 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.9987244771 50.4703680194 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.0 104.977214359 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5714285714 20.9669160288 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.25397266985 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139289329149 0.242375264174 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785991357116 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530795007772 0.071462118173 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101303384367 0.151781067708 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050250029833 0.0609392437508 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 12.6369458128 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.9458128079 141% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.94827586207 196% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.3980295567 138% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.5123152709 190% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.