Any recent invention that you think has proved detrimental or beneficial to society?
The role of computers as a recent invention has served mankind astronomically with many people claiming that the advent of the internet has paved way for unreal communication among people. However, I believe that the internet has made people smarter and competitive in this modern world. This essay will further elaborate on both sides and thus, will lead to a logical conclusion.
To begin with, there are many reasons why the internet proves beneficial for our society and the most conspicuous one is that it has provided a medium of instant, easier and effective communication with the people sitting in any corner of the world. For example, the social networking sites like Facebook has made people interact with their long-lost friends and relatives. Moreover, the internet has become the language of business, trade, commerce and various fields which augment the knowledge of people and broaden their horizons. Thus, it is apparent why the internet has proved to be a boon to society.
Nevertheless, there are some drawbacks which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of the internet on the people. The most alarming one is that people now no longer interact face to face with their family or friends and are mostly glued to the screens. A recent survey reveals that. with the rise of the dating and social websites, the divorce rates among couples have increased dramatically.Hence, there is no doubt that the internet has made people more secluded, unsocial and dull.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the impact of the internet is prominent on society although it has some minor drawbacks which can be overlooked when compared with the positives it has offered to humanity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, for example, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 283.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12367491166 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7325616336 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533568904594 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.7187287137 50.4703680194 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.833333333 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.25397266985 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0925298117078 0.242375264174 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0351301732055 0.0925447433944 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483838196822 0.071462118173 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0519359770487 0.151781067708 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304880629651 0.0609392437508 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 12.6369458128 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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