Any recent invention that you think proved beneficial or detrimental to society?
The important of invention which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion .this essay will elaborate both aspects of this trend and this will lead to a logical conclusion
There are myriad of reason which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that computer advantage using is internet consequently children as using games online for instance like pub g example using Google and you tube what app another pivotal aspect for this argument is that help full internet advantage help full school study and home study needless to say that all these merits stand topic invention in a good stead.
However ,there are some pitfalls that negate this argument and which can certainly over whelm the potential influence of this trend but the most alarming is that it helps to communicate with anyone at any time disadvantage we can learn anything from you tube as a result any time call with me as a illustration .example all the friend video call face to face
according to the arguments aforementioned about one can reach a conclusion that the benefit of topic invention internet mobile phone are instrumental indeed nevertheless the potential drawbacks should not be over looked either.
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- Foreign languages should be made compulsory in the primary school. How far do you agree with the above statement? 72
- Any recent invention that you think proved beneficial or detrimental to society? 77
- Any recent invention that you think proved beneficial or detrimental to society. 70
- Foreign languages should be made compulsory in the primary school. How far do you agree with the above statement. 55
- Foreign languages should be made compulsory in the primary school. How far do you agree with the above statement? 55
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, look, nevertheless, so, while, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1113.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 218.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10550458716 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62204418937 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633027522936 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 12.6551724138 16% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 109.0 20.5024630542 532% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.0 50.4703680194 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 556.5 104.977214359 530% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 109.0 20.9669160288 520% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 42.0 7.25397266985 579% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.33497536946 375% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0863529749332 0.242375264174 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068435113373 0.0925447433944 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00854264026396 0.071462118173 12% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0496007004985 0.151781067708 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0134061813882 0.0609392437508 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 57.1 12.6369458128 452% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -39.16 53.1260098522 -74% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.54236453202 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 45.8 10.9458128079 418% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.54 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.81 8.32886699507 154% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 9.94827586207 573% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 45.6 10.3980295567 439% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 46.0 10.5123152709 438% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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