Any recent invention that you think proved beneficial or detrimental to society.
Surely, there has no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day reveals any recent invention which is beneficial for human being has been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussion. I think computer is the best invention because it has made life easier and more comfortable. I will discuss points in further paragraphs.
To commence with, computer is the indispensible part of life and it has proved beneficial for society. Firstly, computers are used in every field such as offices, collages, hospitals extra. Computer provides multiple features so person can store their data for long time and they can easily hired in any time. Moreover, it is helpful for business purposes as well as education. Students can do any assignment with the help of computer and they can solve difficult calculation.
In addition to it, computer provides multitasking features. For example, if a person have do any project or assignment on the computer whereas they can listen to music side by side. Furthermore, it is the best source of entertainment as masses can play games in their free time and watch movie as well as listen to music which provide relaxtion of mind.
In conclusion, computer is the best invention because it has made life easier and more comfortable. In my point of view it had proved beneficial for society.
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- Foreign languages should be made compulsory in the primary school. How far do you agree with the above statement? 55
- Any recent invention that you think proved beneficial or detrimental to society? 77
- Any recent invention that you think proved beneficial or detrimental to society. 70
- Foreign languages should be made compulsory in the primary school. How far do you agree with the above statement. 55
- Foreign languages should be made compulsory in the primary school. How far do you agree with the above statement? 72
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 291, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'hire'
Suggestion: hire
... data for long time and they can easily hired in any time. Moreover, it is helpful fo...
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Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
...features. For example, if a person have do any project or assignment on the comput...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1165.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 233.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85239551601 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56652360515 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2046338223 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2142857143 104.977214359 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6428571429 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.25397266985 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180742654869 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636396742711 0.0925447433944 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770710330489 0.071462118173 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122340988549 0.151781067708 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671218860084 0.0609392437508 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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