It has always been an interesting topic of debate if money can truly bring happiness. Some believe it while others argue that money does not bring happiness. This essay will provide strong points on why money can bring happiness.
It is firmly believed especially by religious people that money is the root of all evil. They will argue that because of greediness and the desire to acquire great amount of fortune, people tend to do illegal things. These crimes will only result to the disruption of society and therefore, will cause chaos and depression to most people. Therefore, this strengthen their position that money is just a material thing that does not bring happiness.
On the other hand, people believe that money is one of the keys to happiness. It brings joy and fulfillment when they use the fortune that they acquired in building and achieving their dreams. For instance, some use their money to buy their dream house and car while others use it to provide assistance to their love ones. It clearly shows that money when properly used can bring a sense of fulfillment, satisfaction and true happiness in their lives.
In conclusion, I fully agree that money when used properly can bring happiness. The sense of fulfillment is overwhelming especially if you know that you have put to good use the money that you worked hard for.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, you know, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 5.94088669951 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 20.9802955665 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1124.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 230.0 242.827586207 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88695652174 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50655096329 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530434782609 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 341.1 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.9730997823 50.4703680194 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.4615384615 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6923076923 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261875990723 0.242375264174 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100737510025 0.0925447433944 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758808412804 0.071462118173 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158299310104 0.151781067708 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579300435007 0.0609392437508 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.32886699507 87% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 55.0591133005 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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