Health and education are equally important and the debate on which sector should receive more funding and support is always an interesting topic. Each one of us needs to be healthy and properly educated but I think that education should be prioritize.
Some people will argue that health should have more financial support as they always say that a healthy society translates to a more resilient and stronger economy. One significant point that they mentioned was that more and more people now are becoming unhealthy and are dying because they simply cannot afford to have themselves checked by a doctor. There are no hospitals near them that can treat their illnesses. Moreover, the number of health professionals is decreasing as they opt to look for other better paying jobs in other countries. All these problems strengthen their position to push the government to increase the funding of the health sector.
Personally, for me, education requires more support as it is the key to solve the society’s problem that holds its progression. By providing more funding, more schools will be built and more children will have access to proper education. Eventually, these students will then become professionals. Some will become scientists, researchers and others will become doctor. All these professionals who were given proper education will help solve the problems encountered not only by the health sector but other socio-economic problems as well.
In conclusion, in terms of financial support, the government should allocate more funding for education as it has definitely a greater impact on the society especially in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 241, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'prioritized'?
Suggestion: prioritized
...ed but I think that education should be prioritize. Some people will argue that health ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, so, then, well, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 261.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32183908046 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81944440377 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8535061414 50.4703680194 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.846153846 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 7.25397266985 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236296135611 0.242375264174 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087660419163 0.0925447433944 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749491671017 0.071462118173 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167674833277 0.151781067708 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450032505871 0.0609392437508 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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