One of the conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in using credit cards instead of cash, be it for buying goods and services or any other transactions. Many people claim that card-less transactions are very beneficial to the society. Others reject this notion and argue that this digital transaction is limited to urban life, not to the remote areas. In my opinion, former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will primarily illustrate the advantages and disadvantages through a pragmatic approach and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriad of benefits which can be attributed to the usage of digital money. Firstly, the most preponderant one is that it is possible to trace the black money and illegal transaction happening in the society, thanks to the ubiquity of technology. Not only digital transaction improves transaction transparency within the country and outside as well, but it also reduces effort to carry cash and prevent one to be the victim of cash theft, thus reducing crime in the society. Therefore, needless to say, all these related advantages of the online transaction have a far-reaching positive effect on the individuals.
Notwithstanding all these merits, the cashless transaction is not without concerns. The primary one stems from the fact that people with less knowledge of digital payments, especially the older one who cannot read and write properly, are subjected to cyber fraud and losing their valuable money to online scams. Besides, people from remote areas are not literate with the computer to manage their transactions online. Hence, it hardly needs to mentions that why many are in favor of making operation based on online form.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that despite some drawbacks, the benefits of not using cash for any modes of payment are indeed too dire to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'mention'.
Suggestion: mention
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 31.9359605911 150% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1207.87684729 134% => OK
No of words: 311.0 242.827586207 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18971061093 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83438280254 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 139.433497537 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591639871383 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 379.143842365 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5833823645 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.285714286 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160450445685 0.242375264174 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050700562561 0.0925447433944 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360064528532 0.071462118173 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867605965401 0.151781067708 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724935847193 0.0609392437508 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 55.0591133005 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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