In the tech-savvy era, a cashless society is becoming a reality in most of the countries and the popularity of the credit and debit cards has increased tremendously. However, some people argue that paper money and metal coins have long been used as a medium of exchange and a standard of value in almost all societies. In my opinion, this can be a two-edged sword. I will discuss my viewpoints in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, there are myriad advantages of credit cards. Firstly, it is now increasingly common for the people to shop online where they cannot use paper money and coins to pay. Secondly, credit cards have small in size so instead to carry huge amount we can pay bills simply by swiping the card. The chief benefits is that we can overdraft in advance when our cash is less. Moreover, some banks provide the money back facility for juveniles in the supermarket by using a certain credit card.
On the flip sides, internet banking is not always fully secured. There is ample evidence of computer viruses, hackers and crimes. Hecker's are after your credit card details and security branches can wipe the entire amount of your bank accounts. Probing further, many small businesses do not have the technology required to accept cash payments. Furthermore, the rate of personal bankruptcy will be on the rise. Hence, it would impact on social problems. Thus, a cashless society may not equal to a well-protected or more suitable world for everyone.
To conclude, it can be said that popularity of the credit card is indeed a positive development if and only if the precautions are taken at every step.
- As people become increasingly more dependent on motorcars, the public transport systems tend to run down. This has serious consequences on both the existing community and the new communities, which are spreading farther and farther from town centres.Suppo 55
- Newspapers and books are outdated. Why do some people believe this? What is your opinion? 72
- As people become increasingly more dependent on motorcars, the public transport systems tend to run down. This has serious consequences on both the existing community and the new communities, which are spreading farther and farther from town centers.Suppo 73
- In a cashless society, people use more credit cards. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon? 79
- Some people like using work by hand. Others prefer using machines. 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 209, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: small
...ins to pay. Secondly, credit cards have small in size so instead to carry huge amount we can ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 279.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83870967742 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6457051825 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 139.433497537 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623655913978 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9534407903 50.4703680194 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4117647059 104.977214359 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4117647059 20.9669160288 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41176470588 7.25397266985 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171765191907 0.242375264174 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046579164495 0.0925447433944 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553900394289 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902033257417 0.151781067708 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441963455564 0.0609392437508 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 12.6369458128 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.1260098522 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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