Day by day some people of rural areas are migrating to metropolitan cities and starting their new life for self- growth and their family. Also, in the big cities there are good facilities and amenities advantages of to live better and luxurious life whereas in rural life there is less scope of progress. I will mention below some points about benefits of living in urban areas and drawbacks of living in the rural areas.
To begin with it is very true that in developed cities there are good opportunities for job and earning bread and butter for own and family. In addition to this, primary requirement such as good education, medical treatment, public transport are common in big cities. Moreover, there are good infrastructure , latest technology , machineries , and modern techniques to setup a new business.
Apart from this, many people with poor financial conditions, travel and settle in big cities to prove themselves and achieve their dreams and goals in various fields and profession like sports, film industry , politics and others. On other hand, life in rural areas is very poor because no good facilities.
So, the government and some organization can help to provide the primary requirement to rural people and make a effective system so that they can easily get basic requirements and other facilities same as Urban areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, whereas, apart from, in addition, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1121.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 221.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07239819005 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69762035052 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7454361673 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.555555556 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5555555556 20.9669160288 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.44444444444 7.25397266985 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.33497536946 281% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209000406462 0.242375264174 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862723180293 0.0925447433944 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721634771175 0.071462118173 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113501644093 0.151781067708 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699417346388 0.0609392437508 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.