People want their country to host an international sporting events. Others believe that the international sporting events bring more problems than benefits.
Discuss both views and give you opinion?
Nowadays, there are increasing popularity to host internatinal sporting events so some individuals want it. However, others people say there are more drawbacks intead of benefits. So, I will discuss both views and opinion in my further parapraphs.
First of all, when the country hosts the sporting events, there are several advantages on that point. Firstly, the country gets good reputation of it’s image in the world and makes good history for coming future evetns. Secondly, through these events, each country make warm relationship for each other and they can growth in theirs economics. Moreover, that events make to encouage the people especially the sport players. For instance, people can know their charactritics of the player’s efficiency and their sturggle. Moreover, junior players get information of tricks and techniques from senior players who come from others nations.
On the flip side, although there are good benefits according to mention earlier points but also there are some drawbacks. First,for this big project of sporting events have to invest lot of money. Furthermore, such kinds of that events sometimes distract on not only students study but also people’s works. For example, in my country every year the IPL tournaments are planned when the Examination Boards take the final exams of secondary and higher education because this reasons students lose theirs concentrate on the study so it is directly affect on the national progress.
In my opinion, actually, this is good step to plan that sporting events because through these events countries make not only good relation but they also have good opportunity to establish new projects and business for better overall nations progress.
To sum-up, no doubt, through this event there are benefits as well as drawbacks but we know that these kinds of events help to get real opportunity good progress of amongst nations for long periods.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, no doubt, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1207.87684729 136% => OK
No of words: 306.0 242.827586207 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35947712418 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65336133427 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 139.433497537 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581699346405 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4712603915 50.4703680194 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.333333333 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5333333333 7.25397266985 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234678829038 0.242375264174 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893489197848 0.0925447433944 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570186116897 0.071462118173 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135508908912 0.151781067708 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863009097587 0.0609392437508 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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