Imitating celebrities in sports and movies is good or bad?
Todays, in the faster world, many individuals follow their favourite role models and try to do same copy. Actually, there may be several merits for getting confidence but sometimes it might badly affect on our life. According to me, it is good for us so I will discuss points in further paragraphs.
Firtst of all, new generation are very smart and get every information and other ideas by using latest gadgets. People can get upgrading information every minutes and know about the life styles of their favourite ones. For example, everyone have smart cell and watch therir’s favourite celebrities life style and routine and after that they follow theirs style of wearing clothes, dieting table, and other things. Moreover, people get confidence when they act same like celebrities and get direction to reach for getting success in the real life.
Moreover, people to be encourage when favorite stars do more struggle and know about their whole story of facing problems and compromising with many things. Also, they to be inspire, how to fight against faces and get solution.
However, although there are many benefits, sometimes this imitating may affect on our life which may be mentally or physically. Infect, people should imitate positive aspects of their star’s work but many people react their negative aspects which are not good for them and our society. For instance, some fans catch only their star’s negative actions and they try to do it such as fighting, taking drugs, using weapons and others.
To sum-up, of course, most of people want to make and react like their favorite heros but they always should accept their positive side where never affect on their life and health.
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... accept their positive side where never affect on their life and health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, for example, for instance, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 8.36945812808 251% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 281.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08896797153 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43506362004 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583629893238 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4743567212 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.072931005783 0.242375264174 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0269415508125 0.0925447433944 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308920375146 0.071462118173 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0368992156203 0.151781067708 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325131717553 0.0609392437508 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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