In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move out of large cities and into regional areas. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages? Give reasons for you answer and include examples from your knowledge or experiences.
Nowadays, there are increasing number of industries as well as buisnesses in the big cities in all over the world. They are being encouraged to establish new businesses or industries by the governments. I think, it would be better ideas for moving in reasonal areas because there are several merits. So, I will explain the reasons and their benefits in the further paragraphs.
First of all, we know about the present situation in the big cities where there are increasing population and over crowding which make that cities more polloution, and people are facing a lot problem too. For this reason, the governments are patronising to higer industries and business partners for migrate in territorial areas becasue they get more spaces for expanding thier units. For example, in my nation, many metropolitien cities have many and big industries and business hubs, and also each industry and business have number of units have been established in main areas in the city. Moreover, through this system, unemployment situations could be declined, and regional area’s people get good opportunities for doing job as well as business. As a result, in some large extend, over population situations can be reduced and balanced the structure of environment conditions.
Moreover, the government always supports theirs to make successful such system for better national ecological conditions. If such industries and business units are placed in the regional areas, the people of regional areas never depend on big cities, and they get easily general products and services.
To sum-up, it would be better that situation when the big units of industries and business partners move to regional areas. There are not only benefits in the ecological system but also in the environment conditions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, well, as for, for example, i think, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 285.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30526315789 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84099176801 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 472.5 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1996877043 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.307692308 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.25397266985 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218848967084 0.242375264174 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796942598402 0.0925447433944 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044334266683 0.071462118173 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13749961424 0.151781067708 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291756434326 0.0609392437508 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 12.6369458128 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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