Nowadays, education is very important part in the world. In 21th century technology has changed the world and system is being updated in every minutes. we have to get education without finding any arguments. University is most greatest step to get better future life. I will discuss some reasons in the following paragraphs.
First of all, the main reason is that students get good knowledge and job opportunities. Moreover, this is a step for better career and getting desire goal. For example, one of my collage friend, his started the collage before doing job in the shop but than after he realized that good education very helpful for further his career, and after finishing the collage education, he got good position in the multi national company, also achieved higher societal status in the society.
Secondly, university is such a place where people make relation with other people and understand each other. Furthermore, people make a group for discussion and solution of coming the problems in the future. Moreover, they get good guide line and serve those people who need very much.
To summarize, university is real place where people not only get success but also very helpful their society too.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
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Line 1, column 223, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'greatest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: greatest
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the greatest'.
Suggestion: most the greatest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 31.9359605911 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1014.0 1207.87684729 84% => OK
No of words: 200.0 242.827586207 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52172559966 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 139.433497537 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 379.143842365 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 70.320101441 50.4703680194 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 104.977214359 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.25397266985 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180404206735 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606375927085 0.0925447433944 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401441347871 0.071462118173 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10127867932 0.151781067708 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374602227182 0.0609392437508 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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