Effects of internet and social media on young people.
Nowadays, increasing popularity of internet and mass media among juveniles. Although, there are several benefits of using it, but we cannot ignore their drawbacks. So, I will discuss the effects of internet as well as social media on the young in my further paragraphs.
To begin with, since, technology has been developed, most juveniles spend more time on internet and television. As a result, their physical conditions to be down and it is possibility to unstable their mentally position. Moreover, they whole time indulge on internet games and other activities and live tele-cast matches and blood-sports channels so that they cannot get out-door games activities which are actually required for making physical strength and mentally powerful.
Moreover, it is fact that the internet such a way that you can find and reach any point whatever we want. So, most youngers watch crime shows and fighter scenes and than after imitation all that things which is not good for their family as well as society. Furthermore, that reasons are affecting directedly on their education and they always distract to be from their study. It is well known fact that younger have responsibilities for growing up better future of their nations.
To sum-up, although there are good beneficial of using internet and mass media but it depends on the younger generation that how to use it and make for effective not only for owns but also society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ical strength and mentally powerful. Moreover, it is fact that the internet such a wa...
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Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: AND_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...atch crime shows and fighter scenes and than after imitation all that things which i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, moreover, so, well, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1204.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 235.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12340425532 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69123285297 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608510638298 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.751379088 50.4703680194 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.454545455 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3636363636 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.25397266985 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198969818549 0.242375264174 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823496437033 0.0925447433944 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125816621972 0.071462118173 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143124341638 0.151781067708 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129003055924 0.0609392437508 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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