Students should be required to stay in school until the age of eighteen. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ? Support your point of view with reasons and/or example from your own experience.
Nodwdays, education is the best part and parcel in the world and so that every humans should be educated for surving in the world. I think, it is required that school education should be continued until the age of eighteen. I am agree to a large extent that statement so I will put my reasons and exmple in the further paragraphs.
First of all, without education it is too difficult in the world, and through that we can get the ideas and solution. If the students would be given the education until the age of eighteen, they can learn about all subject in proper manner according to their ages. Moreover, the education should be given util the age of eighteen means they connect with under education pressure, and they cannot take others extra burdens as well as pressure for life decisions. For example, human’s life is bounded by many disasters and they have to solve their problems by taking good decisions but the time period of education, students have responsibility to gain more effective education and planning for next steps of life.
Moreover, students can get proper education and they never distract from others issues of life so parents should be given the education to their children until the age of eighteen.
To sum-up, education is the main part and parcel for humans and they should never loss this opportunity so it would be better for every students that they should take education until the age of eighteen.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 230, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...ntinued until the age of eighteen. I am agree to a large extent that statement so I w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, well, for example, i think, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1200.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83870967742 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5130642004 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504032258065 0.580463131201 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.0 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.5854612403 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.333333333 104.977214359 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5555555556 20.9669160288 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11111111111 7.25397266985 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182871760607 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101366124581 0.0925447433944 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725882488712 0.071462118173 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139126485663 0.151781067708 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334976269009 0.0609392437508 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 53.1260098522 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.9458128079 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 69.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 62.5 Out of 90
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