Newspapers and books are outdated. Why do some people believe this? What is your opinion?
New modern era, the technology has changed the world with myriad things, e-new and e-book are out of them. This advance technology changed the whole systems. Although, newspapers and books are prefering less compare to online information technology, but in the some cases, they are good demanded, today. My opinion is that newspapers and books are not completely outdated. So, I will put my points in the further paragraphs.
To begin with, the advance technology have taken giant stpes in the world. This technology proved their charactristics and others merits. first, individuals easily access any kind of informations such as eduction, national and international upgrading news, history, science and others. Moreover, this technology is smart, faster, and interesting with fun. Second, people need to pay any books and news papers daily for requiring but online technology have good options, and individuals can find that they want.
On the flip side, though, technology have good advantages, but newspapers and books are preparing in some cases. Firstly, the morning habitual of the people have good option to start with reading newspaper with a cup of tea. Moreover, some individuals love to read different kinds of books which are possible through it touches with their qualities. Secondly, physically read newspapers and books are never distracts to others things like online system because there are lot of sites and funs with full of advertisement which are distracted from to our main topic.
To sum-up, the advance technology have good merits but the daily habitual of humans never change of their life style, and books lovers always touch with their reality too. So, it can be said that newspaper and books are not completely outdated.
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Suggestion: same
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Suggestion: First
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, kind of, such as, in some cases, to begin with, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 8.36945812808 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 280.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28571428571 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66085570094 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.931034482759 537% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.6572860736 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.25397266985 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203866090928 0.242375264174 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817578191363 0.0925447433944 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787930258989 0.071462118173 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133063700232 0.151781067708 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050099311566 0.0609392437508 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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